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Here it comes At three in the morning, half-asleep I’d listen to Spanish in my ears Your pink lips slurring them, Not love songs, but fanciful nonsense Anything to make ...

Under a tree in a cemetery I found peace under a rock change one of the "under"s to "below" or something. i loved the images in the latter part of ...

I can relate with this feeling, as it is pure and true. But this can be expressed better and with less "baby"-ness. At least come up with something more interesting ...

I am not the vocabulary queen Nor am I the spelling bee And definitely not the grammar police I - - not the best of beginnings A rose is not ...

It does add that feeling. You were successful.

This...well, I can't really offer an opinion on it because some of the words you used in here turned me off. But trying really hard to be open minded (breathing ...

The life you love will only go as far as the bottom of the wick. that made me shiver fix beyond... --You seem to be writing more poetry lately. I'm ...

Wow. I loved this, I loved this feeling, and I understand what you mean. All I have is praise for this. So sorry I can't offer any constructive critisizm, but ...

You know, I usually would reprimand you for making such long stanzas that were so seemingly unstructured, or by incorporating a language but you fixed both of these flawing aspects ...

You know what a poem is and how to write one. But you attempt to conquer such strong aspects of life (or life itself) in a sort of...rambling structure. I ...

I thought this was a bit awkward in some places, but basically the freeverse was outstanding and the ending perfect. The only objection I have was that you dragged out ...

My quantum coffee cup Is dry, barren like My soul this Sunday morning I looked picturesque sliding the styrofoam down the asphalt drive I figured it was over – Before ...

thinking things are what they're not this line sounds awkward God you're beautiful God, you're beautiful. I must admit, I hate haiku, too, so I can't voice a proper opinion. ...

I'd hate to sound stupid, but I really can't understand the..er...language in this poem. I bet it means something. Really. But it's vague with all the forgien-ness.

that fell from the clouds that enveloped me; that fell from the clouds and enveloped me. or something without two "that's"